Newbie looking for some advice on webpage to improve on-page optimisation

[moer2237]

Hi there,

I'm a newbie to SEO so need all the help i can get. I'm looking for honest comments & advice for my project website.

www(dot)mytravel22(dot)com/kuala-lumpur-hotels.html

I will focus onpage SEO first before going off-page SEO. I'm also trying to optimize the keyword "hotels in Kuala Lumpur area" for this page only (not domain/index.html)

Please highlight any critical issue if there any.

Many thanks in advance!

[Mellisa Smith]

Can you tell me "(not domain/index.html)" what is this mean so I will able to give you best and right suggestion.

[moer2237]

Can you tell me "(not domain/index.html)" what is this mean so I will able to give you best and right suggestion.

Sorry for the confusion. It means:-

http://www.mytravel22.com/kuala-lumpur-hotels.html   - this is the one that needs the review & comment

http://www.mytravel22.com/  -  not this one, coz it's not yet fully completed.

Hope the moderators won't nail me for this, coz serious i'm not spamming here.

[Mellisa Smith]

At first, properly design your website because it looks like very poor web design. Choose relevant design or theme for the website as per your niche means travel.

If talking about SEO, then the description of this page which you have specified here is not proper hence should make it more descriptive with sentence inspite of keywords. Your website also has not robots.txt file, the fonts of the content in the website are very big and lots of other points.

Inspite of targeting only one keyword “hotels in Kuala Lumpur area” for your webpage, you should also target diverse relative and long tail keywords within it.

I think before going to do proper onpage optimization you should read Google guidelines http://support.google.com/webmasters/bin/answer.py?hl=en&answer=35769

I hope this will help you……